(This is an entry in my blog, but I don't know my grammar is correct or not, someone can check it for me, i'm just a pre-intermediate student Emotion: sadThank You! )

Now is 4 p.m. I have just had a dream. I slept from 2p.m and I woke up with a start. Therefore, I can remember what happened in my dream. I have to write it now if not I will forget it, forget my dream and also forget my feeling.

I dreamed about my older brother. It is just a simple story. I went out to a supermarket. I think it is a supermarket because in dream, the sight had change. I went to there to buy something and I met Nam Nino-my friend there. He asked me something .I cannot remember exactly, may be he asked where I am going or about my health. I just answered him in a perfunctory manner. Then I continued on my way, I had an appointment with someone important in a restaurant of supermarket. I felt tense because only the rich goes there where is a luxurious place. In dream, I walked across this place a few times. However, I have never gone there. Now I was going to there.

Suddenly I saw my brother. I was very amusing because he cannot go far away our house. He stood there, smiled with anything he see, anyone he meet. He was friendly with everything; maybe using “smirk” is more correct than “smile”. He like the first time he saw the life. Nevertheless, everyone saw him with strange looking, everyone jested him. I was moved. I ran to him, asked him why he went there. He did not answer me, just smiled, no, smirked. My mind was confused and I was very worried. Everything shortly changed unexpectedly. He and I were standing in an old place. Like time turned to 15 years ago.

I ran to ask somebody could help me where we were. Suddenly there was a gang of ruffian went to him while I was asking a man. My bro did not care them. He saw everything with innocent glint. Then that gang stared bullying him. In dream, I am stronger than in real, so I ran to protect him. But while I was fighting against them, my bro was still emotionless. He continued smirking.

They were crowded. I got a shower of blows. Suddenly, I transformed into my bro. I could saw what he was thinking. He was wondering where he was, and where his friends are, what those people was doing, what these things is. I was he. I saw the life very strange. I saw life in the world that has no relationships, no interaction with anyone, and no knowledge about everything. I was alone, alone in an unknown world. I turned into him, but I still had my mind. I was very scare, why I did not understand him when I was myself.

I started out of my sleep. I saw him in real life. He was lying beside me. Nevertheless, I know that dream is a part of truth. He has a depression. He only lives in our house, he has no friend, he has no competence for a going out, he could not communicate, and he is apparently quite unsightly. While I have everything, I can do anything I want. But I don’t have enough caring to my bro. I usually think that I must to success in the future, earn money as much as possible, then I will take care of him. I seem to forget him in present. I have done many bad things for him. I get the blame for that.

I have to do something to help him now. The mid-autumn festival is coming. I will take him to a party of my volunteer club. I have to help him communicate with people. I have to do that.

While I was typing this entry, he stood beside me, and tried to see what I am writing. He was severely short-sighted. I asked him “do you understand”. Certainly, he does not know because he could not read English. He is smiling with something...
i think it's hard to understand my writing Emotion: crying
You need to be more consistent with your tenses.
ImMeI dreamed about my older brother. It is just a simple story. I went out to a supermarket. I think it is a supermarket because in ___ dream, the sight had change_. I went to there to buy something and I met Nam Nino-my friend there. He asked me something .I cannot remember exactly, may be he asked where I am going or about my health. I just answered him in a perfunctory manner. Then I continued on my way, I had an appointment with someone important in a restaurant of supermarket. I felt tense because only the rich goes there where is a luxurious place. In dream, I walked across this place a few times. However, I have never gone there. Now I was going to there.