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Before printing press was invented ,Mad hard obtained news , imformation and knowledge. Many people got news and knowledge form gossip or tale . Until Gutenberg had invented printing press , The world was changed Many knowledge began to spread form west to east and form north to south and the first public newspapers was published in this time .The newspaper was became channel for public opinion.The world was change again when wave had discovered and led to invent radio. The ways to get news had other way than sound and voice when television and film came. Despite people have many way to get news ,Although people have other to get information, the newspaper still important until today that may be cause by many factor that can divided into countless factor. But I will classified important factor by two type, according form viewpoint: Form consumer view and commercial viewpoint.

Form consumer viewpoints have three factor; cheapness , convenient for read and variety .First ,cheapness is most important factor .In many country ,people can buy newspaper by two or three cent and don’t play other cost .Second factor is convenient , other mass media especially electronic mass media that want many thing to support ,for example ,television want electric , internet want service cost .On the contrary , you want light only for read it. Finally factor is variety. Many people want all in one mass media ,for example ,have feature ,cartoon , article and news in one and the newspaper can be.

Form commercial viewpoints that is divided in to three viewpoints : Form advertiser viewpoint, form public relation views point. However, They have same reason for send massage to public. In additional, the newspaper is chosen for many people read it and had cheaper price for advertising than other mass media.
Hi, A nice article but there are some errors that occur throughout for you to work on. Emotion: smile

Spellings: check carefully. FROM not form, for example. message not massage. information not imformation.

Lots of missing articles such as 'the'.

Verb tenses are a bit confused.

Stop using capital letters after commas.

Some incorrect word choices: Mad hard, Until Gutenberg, want light, ,

Have a go at finding these and post the revised version for some more help.
Nona The BritHi, A nice article but there are some errors that occur throughout for you to work on. Emotion: smile

Spellings: check carefully. FROM not form, for example. message not massage. information not imformation.

Lots of missing articles such as 'the'.

Verb tenses are a bit confused.

Stop using capital letters after commas.

Some incorrect word choices: Mad hard, Until Gutenberg, want light, ,

Have a go at finding these and post the revised version for some more help.

Hi Nona The Brit thank for you suggestion. That very useful.

and this is my revised version.

Before printing press was invented , People hard obtained news , information and knowledge. Many people got news and knowledge form gossip or tale . After Gutenberg had invented printing press , The world was changed .Many knowledge began to spread form west to east and form north to south and the first public newspapers was published in this time .A newspaper became channel for public opinion.The world was change again when wave had discovered and led to invent radio. Ways to get news had other way than sound and voice when television and film came. Despite people have many ways to get news and information, a newspaper still important until today that may be cause by many factors that can divided into countless factors. But I will classify important factors by two type, according form viewpoint: Form consumer view and commercial viewpoint.

Form consumer viewpoints have three factor; cheapness , convenient for read and variety .First ,cheapness is most important factor .In many country ,people can buy newspaper by two or three cent and don’t play other cost .Second factor is convenient , other mass media especially electronic mass media that want many thing to support ,for example ,television want electric , internet want service cost .On the contrary , you want light only for read newspaper. Finally factor is variety. Many people want all in one mass media ,for example ,have feature ,cartoon , article and news in one and the newspaper can be.

Form commercial viewpoints that is divided in to two viewpoints : Form advertiser viewpoint and form public relation views point. However, they have same reason for send message to public. In additional, a newspaper is chosen for many people read it and has cheaper price for advertising than other mass media.
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You forgot to do thse corrections.

Spellings: check carefully. FROM not form..

Stop using capital letters after commas.


It is ok ?.

Before printing press was invented , people hard obtained news , information and knowledge. Many people got news and knowledge from gossip or tale . After Gutenberg had invented printing press , the world was changed .Many knowledge began to spread from west to east and from north to south and the first public newspapers was published in this time .A newspaper became channel for public opinion.The world was change again when wave had discovered and led to invent radio. Ways to get news had other way than sound and voice when television and film came. Despite people have many ways to get news and information, a newspaper still important until today that may be cause by many factors that can divided into countless factors. But I will classify important factors by two type, according from viewpoint: From consumer view and commercial viewpoint.

From consumer viewpoints have three factor; cheapness , convenient for read and variety .First ,cheapness is most important factor .In many country ,people can buy newspaper by two or three cent and don’t play other cost .Second factor is convenient , other mass media especially electronic mass media that want many thing to support ,for example ,television want electric , internet want service cost .On the contrary , you want light only for read newspaper. Finally factor is variety. Many people want all in one mass media ,for example ,have feature ,cartoon , article and news in one and the newspaper can be.

From commercial viewpoints that is divided in to two viewpoints : From advertiser viewpoint and form public relation views point. However, they have same reason for send message to public. In additional, a newspaper is chosen for many people read it and has cheaper price for advertising than other mass media.
Punctuation - the spaces follow the punctuation, like this.

Gutenberg invented movable type, not the printing press. Printing presses were already in use

"people hard obtained" - what does this mean? Can you explain.

"The world was change again when wave had discovered and led to invent radio" - please explain this sentence.
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Why dont I just re-write this for you?

Before printing press was invented, it was hard to obtain news, information and knowledge. Many people got news and knowledge from gossip or tales...until Gutenberg invented printing press. The world was changed forever. Information began to spread from East to West and from North to South and the first public newspaper was published in this time .The newspaper became a channel for public opinion.The world was changed again when waves had been discovered. This soon led to the invention of the radio. We were able to get news visually and hear it when television and film came. Despite people having many ways to get news, the newspaper is still important today. But I will classify the important factors by two types, according to the consumer viewpoint and the commercial viewpoint.

There are three factors to consider when talking about the viewpoint of a consumer: Cheapness, conveneince and variety. Firstly, the price is the most important factor. In many countries, people can buy newspapers for just two or three cents. The second most important factor is convenienience. Other mass media, especially electronic mass media need other things to support them - for example, to power the television, you will need electric, to get the internet, you will need to pay a service charge. Although, with a newspaper, you only need light to read it. The last factor is variety. Most people want many features such as cartoons, articles, the news and puzzles in one place - and the newspaper provides a home for all three.

When looking at this from a commercial viewpoint, two main groups of people need to be considered: the advertiser's viewpoint and from the public relation's view point. However, they have same reason for sending massages to the public. Also, the newspaper is made so a wide range of people can read it and it is cheaper to advertise than other medias.

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