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Many women in the entire world have abortions. Women believe there are many reasons to abort such as fear of having or raising a child, rape, or not having enough money. But whatever the situation, there is never an acceptable reason to get an abortion. Some important reasons why women should not abort have to do with human values, religious values, and values of conscience.
The first reason why women should not have an abortion is related to basic human values. Women need to think about their unborn babies who are not responsible for this situation. These unborn babies should have the privilege to live and grow into a normal person. Women need to be more humanitarian and less egoistic with these babies. On the other hand, the baby doesn’t know how or why he is here. It is not necessary to kill a life; there are many other solutions to resolve this problem short of abortion.
The second reason why women should not abort has to do with religious values. In almost all religions, a woman is not permitted to have an abortion. If they do, their religions will punish them. In some religions, for example, a woman cannot take communion after having an abortion, and before taking communion again, she must do many things as a form of penitence. In whatever religion, abortion is punished and for this reason, women should not abort.
Finally, the third and most important reason why women should not
abort is the related to her conscience. When a woman has an abortion, she will always think about the baby she might have had. She will always believe about the future that could have happened with her baby which will always remind her that she killed it. Because she has had an abortion, she will never have a good life, and her conscience will remind her of what she had done. Because a woman who has an abortion can’t forget about what she has done, these thoughts will always be with her, and the results can be calamitous.
There are many reasons why women should not have an abortion. The truth is that women need to think about the consequences that can occur before having sexual relations. I think that the effects of an abortion can be very sad for everyone involved, both for the woman who has the abortion and for the family who lives with her.
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i think this 'essay' is a very niave look at abortion. There is no right or wrong every woman should have the opportunity to make a choice that effects them. In my oppinion no one person has the right to say whether abortion is wrong or right, every woman has the right to make their decision based on their unique situation. It is so easy to generalise, however the fact of the mater is no two people have the same story.

I think this essay is too simple and lacks depth.
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Anonymous i think this 'essay' is a very niave look at abortion. There is no right or wrong every woman should have the opportunity to make a choice that effects them. In my oppinion no one person has the right to say whether abortion is wrong or right, every woman has the right to make their decision based on their unique situation. It is so easy to generalise, however the fact of the mater is no two people have the same story.I think this essay is too simple and lacks depth.
Sorry but I completely disagree respectively Of course. this essay is the author opinion and everyone has a right to one. personally, I feel the author is completely right Women have other choices than murdering the baby. Adoption for instances giving the baby parents who are fit to raise a child would be a good choice.
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