Hi everybody , this is my composition on topic "wildlife extinction". Hope you will take a look

Many environmental experts are pessimistic about the future of our planet, especially the wildlife extinction . Reality shows clearly to us that the number of animal living in our planet is decreasing as they are being hunted by people or dying because of losing their habitat . If we keep on hunting and destroy the environment , we will put an end to the wildlife and step one step closer to the end of the world.

Today ,with the development of industry which is consider as the indispensable path in economy , people build up chemical factories and refinery . Chemical gas rising from these factory will spoil the air , further damage the ozone layer and is the main factor to make acid rain.

There will be more losses of tropical rainforest thus nothing can absorb carbonic and give out oxygen. The pollution will cause the climate it self to change ,therefore some animals that can’t adapt themselves will scarcely be able to survive . As their habitats are being destroyed , the animals are also at risk . It is feared that some endangered species will be extinct, and sooner or later, human kind will take affected as well. On the other hand, hunting sometimes also cause some animals to extinction. It’s absolutely erroneous and shameful if the hunting is done only to satisfy vain pleasure like fur coat or a trophy hanging in the hunter’s house. In addition , it’s illegal to hunt such endangered animals for their valuable parts of body. These people don’t know what they do to satisfy their greed is to destroy the wildlife and commit crimes.

There are many reason for the end of the Earth if all the wildlife are fall in extinction . First, the balance of the environment will be broken,

this broken balance will certainly cause change in the climate . And as you see above , this change is extremely harmful to every living beings on Earth. Long ago , since the beginning of the Earth ,from the forming to the entire world, animals and plants are two most important factor that keeping our planet stable. By interacting each other , animals eat plants to survive and give manure to feed plants in contrast. Furthermore , animals intermediately help plants in pollination. Losing any of two will certainly put an end to the other.

Many people say that It’s time for the government using their power to maintain the habitats for animals and save our planet . Government must pay for research into alternative energy source like solar power , in order to minimize the chemical harm to the wildlife. Stricter policy must be promulgated , so that people will no longer be able to hunt the animal with impunity. Joining one of the many pressure groups which work to protect the wildlife and remember that we not only protect the wildlife but also protect our lives.
Fith_for_Fear Many environmental experts are pessimistic about the future of our planet, especially the wildlife extinction . Reality shows clearly to us that the number of animal living in our planet is decreasing as they are being hunted by people or dying because of losing their habitat . If we keep on hunting and destroy the environment , we will put an end to the wildlife and step one step closer to the end of the world.

Today ,with the development of industry which is consider as the indispensable path in economy , people build up chemical factories and refinery . Chemical gas rising from these factory will spoil the air , further damage the ozone layer and is the main factor to make acid rain.

There will be more losses of tropical rainforest thus nothing can absorb carbonic and give out oxygen. The pollution will cause the climate it self to change ,therefore some animals that can’t adapt themselves will scarcely be able to survive . As their habitats are being destroyed , the animals are also at risk . It is feared that some endangered species will be extinct, and sooner or later, human kind will take affected as well. On the other hand, hunting sometimes also cause some animals to extinction. It’s absolutely erroneous and shameful if the hunting is done only to satisfy vain pleasure like fur coat or a trophy hanging in the hunter’s house. In addition , it’s illegal to hunt such endangered animals for their valuable parts of body. These people don’t know what they do to satisfy their greed is to destroy the wildlife and commit crimes.

There are many reason_ for the end of the Earth if all the wildlife are fall in extinction . First, the balance of the environment will be broken,

this broken balance will certainly cause change in the climate . And as you see above , this change is extremely harmful to every living beings on Earth. Long ago , since the beginning of the Earth ,from the forming to the entire world, animals and plants are two most important factor that keeping our planet stable. By interacting ___ each other , animals eat plants to survive and give manure to feed plants in contrast. Furthermore , animals intermediately help plants in pollination. Losing any of two will certainly put an end to the other.

Many people say that It’s time for the government __ using their power to maintain the habitats for animals and save our planet . Government must pay for research into alternative energy source like solar power , in order to minimize the chemical harm to the wildlife. Stricter policy must be promulgated , so that people will no longer be able to hunt the animal with impunity. Joining one of the many pressure groups which work to protect the wildlife and remember that we not only protect the wildlife but also protect our lives.

Highlighted the most glaring errors.
Yeah, they're all glaring mistakes.

However , I have fixed some of them . But tell me where is the mistake in the sentence : ".... because of losing their habitat ...." , I', still confused with it .

Waiting for your help

Many environmental experts are pessimistic about the future of our planet, especially the wildlife extinction . Reality shows clearly to us that the number of animal living in our planet is decreasing as they are being hunted by people or dying because of losing their habitat . If we keep on hunting and destroying the environment , we will put an end to the wildlife and will certainly step more closely to the end of the world.

Today ,with the development of industry which is considered as the indispensable path in economy , people build up chemical factories and refineries . Chemical gas rising from these factory will spoil the air , further damage the ozone layer and has become the main factor causing acid rain.There will be more losses of tropical rainforest thus nothing can absorb carbonic and give out oxygen. The pollution will cause the climate itself to change ,therefore some animals that can’t adapt themselves will scarcely be able to survive . As their habitats are being destroyed , the animals are also at risk . It is feared that some endangered species will be extinct, and sooner or later, human kind will be affected as well. On the other hand, hunting sometimes also causes some animals to extinction. It’s absolutely erroneous and shameful if the hunting is done only to satisfy vain pleasure like fur coat or a trophy hanging in the hunter’s house. In addition , it’s illegal to hunt such endangered animals for their valuable parts of body. These people don’t know what they do to satisfy their greed is to destroy the wildlife and commit crimes.

There will be many reason for the end of the Earth if all the animal went into extinction . First, the balance of the environment will be broken, this broken balance will deeply cause change in the climate . And as you see above , this change is extremely harmful to every living beings on Earth. Long ago , since the beginning of the Earth ,animals and plants are two most important factor that keep our planet stable. By interacting ___ each other , animals eat plants to survive and give manure to feed plants in contrast. Furthermore , animals intermediately help plants in pollination. Losing any of two will certainly put an end to the other.

Many people say that it’s time for the government to use their power to maintain the habitats for animals and save our planet . Government must pay for research into alternative energy source like solar power , in order to minimize the chemical harm to the wildlife. Stricter policy must be promulgated , so that people will no longer be able to hunt the animal with impunity. Joining one of the many pressure groups which work to protect the wildlife and remember that we not only protect the wildlife but also protect our lives.
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I suggest you not leave spaces before periods or commas. Also, the ___ are for you to fill in. e.g. animal (means you should add something to the end of the word)
Fith_for_Fear Many environmental experts are pessimistic about the future of our planet, especially the wildlife extinction . Reality shows clearly to us that the number of animal living in our planet is decreasing as they are being hunted by people or dying because __ __ losing their habitat . If we keep on hunting and destroying the environment , we will put an end to the wildlife and will certainly step more closely to the end of the world.

Today ,with the development of industry which is considered as the indispensable path in __ economy , people build up chemical factories and refineries . Chemical gas rising from these factory will spoil the air , further damage the ozone layer and has become the main factor causing acid rain.There will be more losses of tropical rainforest thus nothing can absorb ___ ___ and give out oxygen. The pollution will cause the climate itself to change ,therefore some animals that can’t adapt themselves will scarcely be able to survive . As their habitats are being destroyed , the animals are also at risk . It is feared that some endangered species will be extinct, and sooner or later, human ___ will be affected as well. On the other hand, hunting sometimes also causes some animals to ___ extinction. It’s absolutely erroneous and shameful if the hunting is done only to satisfy vain pleasure like fur coat or a trophy hanging in the hunter’s house. In addition , it’s illegal to hunt such endangered animals for their valuable parts of body. These people don’t know what they do to satisfy their greed is to destroy the wildlife and commit crimes.

There will be many reason_ for the end of the Earth if all the animal went into extinction . First, the balance of the environment will be broken, this broken balance will deeply cause change in the climate . And as you see above , this change is extremely harmful to every living beings on Earth. Long ago , since the beginning of the Earth ,animals and plants are two most important factor__ that keep our planet stable. By interacting ___ each other , animals eat plants to survive and give manure to feed plants in ____. Furthermore , animals intermediately help plants in pollination. Losing any of two will certainly put an end to the other.

Many people say that it’s time for the government to use their power to maintain the habitats for animals and save our planet . Government must pay for research into alternative energy source_ like solar power , in order to minimize the chemical harm to the wildlife. Stricter policy must be promulgated , so that people will no longer be able to hunt the animal_ with impunity. Joining one of the many pressure groups which work to protect the wildlife and remember that we not only protect the wildlife but also protect our lives.
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