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Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

Once the inspection has been completed, the results will be provided to PennyMac for the final disbursement to be made and for the claim to be finalized.

Once the inspection has been completed, the results will be provided to PennyMac for the final disbursement to be made and the claim finalized.

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This type of statement would more typically be worded (in the US) as:


"When the inspection has been completed, the results will be sent to PennyMac so that the claim can be finalized and payment made." (The order is usually: the claim is finalized, and then payment made, as the last step in the process. The word "disbursement" is old-fashioned and rarely heard today in the US.)