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Are these sentences clear or is there a better choice in wording:

We are needing to obtain flooring and cabinet selections so that we can move forward with the repairs. Please contact Dan at Carpet Masters at (xxx) xxx-xxxx and Joe at St. Louis Cabinet Warehouse at (xxx) xxx-xxxx at your earliest opportunity to schedule a meeting with them to make the selections.


Edit: Removed phone numbers. CJ

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Lisa BrinkmannWe are needing to obtain need flooring and cabinet selections so (that) we can move forward with (the) repairs. Please contact Dan at Carpet Masters at (xxx) xxx-xxxx and Joe at St. Louis Cabinet Warehouse at (xxx) xxx-xxxx at your earliest opportunity to schedule a meeting with them to make the selections.

As shown. Words in parentheses are optional. I would omit them.

Note: I hope those are not real phone numbers. If so, you have just given them to everyone in the world by putting them on the internet. It's well to keep in mind that there are plenty of crazy people that might like to harass others, "just for fun".

CJ