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I have few sentences based on the word "hair and hairstyle" Please each sentence and make necessary correction if needed. It would be much appreciated if a native English speaker read them, rectify the mistakes if there are any and give the feedback.

Here the sentences.
1) I want to have a new hairstyle starting today.
2) I have to get my hair done by today.
3) I go to my friend's hair salon to get my hair done.
4) I would like to create a new hairstyle for my sister for her wedding, would you help me?
5) I'm getting my hair done at the moment at a hair salon.
6) I would like to get a new hairstyle from you(assume pronoun you as a hairstylist).
7) Could you please do her hair?
8) I think you should try on all the hairstyles on the catalog in order pick the best hairstyle for you.
9) I want to try these new hairstyles on you.
10) I really love doing hairstyles for my customers.
11) After trying these hairstyles on myself and you, I will introduce them to my customers. is that ok?
12) Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to try them(or do them on) my brother who works with me.
13) Give him a new hairstyle.
14) Give me a new hairstyle or create a new hairstyle for me.

Thanks for your help.
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I have underlined the problem areas of incorrect sentences:

4) I would like to create a new hairstyle for my sister for her wedding, would you help me?
8) I think you should try on all the hairstyles on the catalog in order pick the best hairstyle for you.
11) After trying these hairstyles on myself and you, I will introduce them to my customers. is that ok?
12) Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to try them(or do them on) my brother who works with me.
Thanks for your reply, could you please fix the sentences?
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Wonder123, could you please fix the sentences?
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Please check the sentences.

4) I would like to create a new hairstyle for my sister for her wedding. Could you help me?
8) I think you should try all the hairstyles in the catalog in order to pick the best hairstyle for you.
11) After trying these hairstyles on myself and you, I will introduce them to my customers, is that ok?
12) Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to try them on (or do them on) my brother, who works with me.

Thanks
4) I would like to create a new hairstyle for my sister for her wedding. Would you help me?
8) I think you should try all the hairstyles in the catalog in order to pick the best hairstyle for you.
11) After trying these hairstyles on myself and you, I will introduce them to my customers. Is that OK?
12) Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to try them on my brother, who works with me.
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Ok thanks :-)
Mister Micawber12) Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to try them on my brother, who works with me.
Can use do in the above sentence?

Before doing these hairstyles on you, I want to do them on my brother, who works with me.
Wonder123Can use do in the above sentence?
I suppose so. 'Do/get' with 'hairstyle' both sound odd to me but I don't know an alternative and have no hair stylist to ask.
You mean all the sentences in my posting that has word get, getting, do are sounding odd to you?
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