As the birds fly in the sky

I'll give you two presents

Seagulls taught me how to choose

A sparkle from the sun

And a fabulous blue after the cruise.



During the splendid sunset

I'll hire smart jet

By using some colorful smokes

I'll draw huge hearts in a plate.



When the dark rules the night

Moonlight will be my guide

I'll quieten all the noises down

Since only for you nigtingales

Will be singing a ballad.



With the help of an inspring breeze

I'll take pictures of the calm seas

Later I'll smarten them up

In order to give you the the feeling of ease.



One day I'll make a wondrous bunch of flowers

Containing all kinds of fragrant roses

Magical beauties these are

That will bring you happiness.



( I wrote this poem to my English teacher, she said she really liked it Emotion: smile )
This is a good poem. I liked the first 3 stanzas.Frankly, the last 2 stanzas don't go well with them.Post more of your work for us.
Thanks Emotion: smile ok I will.
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anita_aThis is a good poem. I liked the first 3 stanzas.Frankly, the last 2 stanzas don't go well with them.Post more of your work for us.

What's a stanza? Is that what Indonesian people say as "bait"?