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Hello everyone! I recently wrote this poem. Any opinions or recommendations?


Shadow Watcher

I watch everyone's shadows
what follows them everywhere, yet is faceless
someone completely raceless
a dark apparition, nameless
a reflection of what lurks behind
I watch the shadows


thanks, john

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ThatGuyThatDidIt. Any opinions or recommendations?

It has grammar and punctuation problems.

I watch everyone's shadows,
which follow them everywhere, yet are faceless—
completely raceless,
dark apparitions, nameless,
reflections of what lurk behind.
I watch the shadows.