The notice about the appointment of leaders in the work section in the second session of the Committee for Promotion of Green Building

To all members of CPGB:

It is decided, through the work procedure including members’ report, democratic recommendation and full exchange, etc, that Xiao Neng, among other comrades, should be appointed to take office in the work section of the the Committee for Promotion of Green Building, with a term of office from January 1, 2018 to December 31, 2019, according to related provisions and the work requirements of CPGB. The appointment of the vice director and the vice general secretary, among other staff members will be otherwise noticed.

I am doing a translation of an office message. Some members, including a client of mine, have been appointed as the leaders in their respective work sections of the committee.

Could you help me check it?

Thank you.

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