Hello. Would you check my English?

No. 1

M: This restaurant is quite reasonable. The pizza is [ costs ( me ) ] only 380 yen!

F: Yes, and for [ with ] 100 yen more you can have coffee with it.
( Can't I say,"for more 100 yen"?)

M: How nice! Then I'll have it with coffee.

No. 2

M: I hear you played the clarinet at the concert. How was it?

F: It was great, but my boyfriend, Kenji didn't come.

M: Really? That's an awful shame! [ How disappointing! ]

Thank you!
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Both of you gave me good comments. Thank you very much!