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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: What should I bring to the picnic this weekend [ for the weekend ]?

F: Didn't [ Don't ] you know? We're going to have it catered by a

professional.

M: Oh. I didn't know that it is so big.

No. 2

M: You shouldn't park here. You'll get a ticket.

F: Is this a no-parking zone? How do you know ( it )?

M: From my ( own ) experience. I was fined for a parking violation [ breach ] here.

Thank you. kenta
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No. 1

M: What should I bring to the picnic this weekend [ for the weekend ]?

F: Didn't [ Don't ] you know? We're going to have it catered by a

professional.

M: Oh. I didn't know that it would be is so big.

No. 2

M: You shouldn't park here. You'll get a ticket.

F: Is this a no-parking zone? How do you know ( it )?

M: From personal my ( own ) (my own is OK, too) experience. I was fined for a parking violation [ breach ] here.
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Thank you. You helped me a lot.

kenta