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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?

F: Yeah. He has learned the Japanese abacus for a long time.

M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses

( desktop ) calculator.

No. 2

M: Hi, Yoko. You're wearing a nice scarf.

F: Oh, thank you. I wondered how I ( would ) look.

M: It really looks good [ nice ] on you. I like the color, too.

F: That's a nice compliment. You always make me happy.

Thank you. kenta
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Hi,

No. 1

M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?

F: Yeah. He's been learning the Japanese abacus for a long time.

M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses

a ( desktop ) calculator.

This whole dialogue above seems a bit stilted to me.

Are they talking about his speed or his accuracy?

No. 2

M: Hi, Yoko. You're wearing a nice scarf.

F: Oh, thank you. I was wondering how it looked.

M: It really looks good [ nice ] on you. I like the color, too.

F: That's a nice compliment. You always make me happy.

Clive
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Hi, Clive. You always give me good advice. Thank you!

kenta