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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Have you ever tried sushi?

F: No. I've never had an opportunity to try it. I don't like raw fish.

M: Don't worry. Now we can enjoy many kinds of sushi.

F: Then would you take me to your favorite sushi restaurant?

No. 2

F: You don't seem like yourself. What's wrong?

M: I got a call from a [ my ] client, and he turned down [ refused ] my offer.

F: That's too bad. But I'm sure you'll do better [ make it ] next time.

Thank you. kenta
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No. 1

M: Have you ever tried sushi?

F: No. I've never had the chance to try it (or so). I don't like raw fish.

M: NO WORRIES. Now wE'll enjoy many kinds of sushi.

F: Then would you take me to your favorite sushi restaurant?

No. 2

F: You don't seem like yourself. What's wrong?

M: I got a call from a [ my ] client, and he turned down [ refused ] my offer.

F: That's too bad. But I'm sure you'll do better [ make it ] next time.

I think it's fine I'd be wrong if I said you made great mistakes.
Hi. You helped me a lot. Thank you!

kenta