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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: We're planning a picnic at the shore this weekend.

F: Haven't you heard the ( weather ) forecast? They are predicting

terrible rain on Saturday.

M: Well, right. But everything in life is a gamble. Let's try [ give it a try ].

No. 2

M: Is this your first time to come to Japan?

F: Yes. I hope I'll learn ( about ) Japanese history.

M: Then, let me show you [ I'll show you ] around this town [ here ] this weekend.

Thank you. kenta

F: Oh, please. I'd like to go ( and ) see the castle in this town.
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Hi Kenta

Here are my suggestions:
KentaNo. 1

M: We're planning a picnic at the shore this weekend.

F: Haven't you heard the ( weather ) forecast? They are predicting

terrible rain on Saturday.

M: Well, yes, but everything in life is a gamble. Let's try [ give it a try ] I'm hoping we'll beat the odds.
KentaM: Is this your first time to come in/to Japan?

F: Yes. I hope I'll learn something about Japanese history.

M: Then, let me show you [ I'll show you ] around this town [ here ] this weekend.

F: Oh, please do. I'd like that!/That would be great! I'd like to go ( and ) see the castle in this town.
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Thank you, Yankee. Your comment is very easy to understand and helpful!

kenta