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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1

M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy?

F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.

M: That reminds me. I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are

worn out at the heels.

No. 2

M: Sorry I'm late.

F: There you are! We're [ We've been ] looking all over for you. You overslept?

M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called me and she asked me

to lend her some of my novels.

Thank you. kenta
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M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy?
F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
M: That reminds me I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are worn out at the heels.

No. 2

M: Sorry I'm late.
F: There you are! We've been looking all over for you. You overslept?
M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called and asked me to lend her some of my novels.
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Hi Kenta,
In addition: Capitalize Coke, and what are "basket shoes"? I'm not sure that that one is correct.
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Hi, Mr Micawber. You always help me a lot.

Thank you. kenta
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Hi, Geek. I should have written "basketball shoes".

Is that right?

kenta
You could, but [url=http://www.pickyourshoes.com/casual/puma_basket_wht_blk.htm ]BASKET SHOES[/url] also exist - that's what I thought you meant, Kenta.