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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: How many are ( there ) in your family?

F: I have a big [ large ] family. There're ten.

M: Ten? Wow! Your parents are very busy, aren't they?

F: Not only they but also we, older sisters are!

No. 2

M: I hear you'll buy a new house. You must have saved quite a bit of money.

F: Well, actually, we had to take out [ make ] loans from the bank.

M: How long are you going to pay back?

F: More than twenty years. That's incredible!

Thank you. kenta
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No. 1

M: How many are there in your family?

F: I have a big/large family. There're ten of us.

M: Ten? Wow! Your parents must be very busy!

F: Not just them. All us older sisters are, too!

No. 2

M: I hear you're going to buy a new house. You must have saved quite a bit of money.

F: Well, actually, we had to take out a mortgage from the bank.

M: How long are you going to be paying it back?

F: More than twenty years.

M: That's awful!
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Hi, Mister Micawber. You taught me a lot.

Thank you very much. kenta