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Hi teachers,
This man has no money, and he cannot works. His face and body are very, very ugly, so of course many people are afraid of him. But he is a very interesting man. He can read and write, and he thinks a lot. He is a good, quiet man. Sometimes he makes things with his hands and gives them to the nurses, because they are kind to him.

Would the following be suitabe questions and answers?
1. Why couldn't Merrick have a job? Because he was very ugly and people were afraid of him.
2. Why did Merrick cath Mr Goom's attention? Because he could read, write, and think a lot.
3. According to Mr Goom, what was Merrick like? He was a ggod quet man.
4. To whom he sometimes created things with his hand? To the nurses.
5. Were the nurses gentle toward him? Yes, they were.

TS
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Thinking Spain2. Why did Merrick cath Mr Goom's attention? Because he could read, write, and think a lot.
I believe this should be "catch".
Thinking Spain3. According to Mr Goom, what was Merrick like? He was a ggod quet man
"He was a good, quiet man."
Thinking Spain4. To whom he sometimes created things with his hand? To the nurses.
"To whom did he sometimes craft things with his hands?" would be a better question.

There should also be a comma in the first answer, after "ugly".

Other than that, you're all clear. The first two look like typos, so I'm guessing that's what they are. Wrote them up just in case.
Hi TS. Obviously, Mr. Goom is speaking.

1. Why couldn't Merrick get a job? Because he was very ugly and people were afraid of him.
2. Why did Merrick catch Mr. Goom's attention? Because Merrick could read, write, and think a lot.
3. According to Mr. Goom, what was Merrick like? He was a good quiet man.
4. For whom did he sometimes create things with his hands? For the nurses.
5. Were the nurses gentle toward him? Yes, they were.

The blue are suggestions. The red ones are required. Emotion: smile
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Here's my version:

Hi teacher

This person is out of money and he cannot work either. He looks very ugly therefore people feel scare to see him or to be with him. Regardless, he is a very interesting person. He is a literate and creative person. Nature wise, he is a nice and quiet personality.
Hi Lemonous,
Thank you for your reply and suggestions.

TS
Sorry, I didn't notice Lemonous' reply or I wouldn't have repeated those corrections.
Lemonous"For whom did he sometimes craft things with his hands?" would be a better question.
This is my only correction to that comment.
Try out our live chat room.
Shawn79Obviously, Mr. Goom is speaking. Yes. Sorry I forgot to mention it. Emotion: embarrassed
Hi Shawn,
Thank you for your help and corrections.
The blue are suggestions. The red ones are required.
My God too many typos. Reason: I was talking on the phone Emotion: phone while I was writing the questions and answers.Emotion: angelNo excuses though. I should have paid more attention.

Time to go to sleep.
Regards
TS
Hi khurram1,
Thank you for your version. It is really good. Unfortunately, I can't change the text. It's from a CD.

TS