Thank you very much for your help.

I have couple comments regarding the attached presentation. Our main audience at the reception is existing businesses. Most of them are struggling to stay in business and get more customers to their stores. In addition to the SCORE services, would you provide them tips on how to expand their customers base, problem areas to look for, marketing tips such as advertise display, and loan opportunities? It seems what you have on the presentation is creating a business plan, which more focus on the audience who seek for help in opening a new business.
I have a couple of comments regarding the attached presentation, which seems to focus on creating a business plan for those seeking help in opening a new business. Our main audience at the reception consists of existing businesses. Most of them are struggling to stay in business and get more customers into their stores. In addition to the SCORE services, could you provide them tips on how to expand their customer base, problem areas to look for, marketing tips such as advertising display, and loan opportunities?

Thank you for your help Mister Micawber