Hello.

I like writing some stories in case of improving my English which is stil very poor Emotion: smile
I've written an imagined story which you can find below. The topic was proposed by some English book I have at home.
Would you mind checking this and telling me what I did wrong or could have done better in this story and this information you're reading at the moment ? Emotion: smile

Thanks in advance
Here's the story.

The worst journey of mine took place when I was 13 I guess. Me and my parents were on our way to Croatia, in case of having 2 weeks of wonderful holiday, when suddenly our car broke down. That happened in Slovakia. There was no one nearby to help us, so we could only count on ourselves. Calling the car assistance was the only thing we could do then. Unfortunately my dad’s handy didn’t want to work so far away from our contry, cause he hadn’t ordered any option to make calls there. My father decided to stop the any car in case of asking for help. The first man to be stopped didn’t speak English but managed to understand we need his mobile. We called some car assistance and awaiting for them was the only thing we could do next. The assistance arrived within an hour. We needed to have our car repaired what lasted at about 5 hours. We didn’t manage to finish our journey that day, so decided to sleep in a hotel.

After sleepless night our journey resumed. We reached Croatia with no further problems and found our hotel ready for having 13 lazy days with sun shining above us. After those two weeks mentioned we were blissfully happy to come back home without any complications.

Have a nice day!
Chris001Hello.

I like writing some stories in case of improving my English which is stil very poor Emotion: smile
I've written an imagined story which you can find below. The topic was proposed by some English book I have at home.
Would you mind checking this and telling me what I did wrong or could have done better in this story and this information you're reading at the moment ? Emotion: smile

Thanks in advance
Here's the story.

The worst journey of mine [My worst journey/The worst journey of my life] took place when I was 13, I guess. Me and my parents [[My parents and I] were on our way to Croatia, in case of [looking forward to/ hoping for/ with the aim of] having 2 weeks of wonderful holiday, when suddenly our car broke down. That happened in Slovakia. There was no one nearby to help us, so we could only count on ourselves. Callingthe car assistance [for assistance/for the car rescue service] was the only thing we could do then. Unfortunately my dad’s handy [mobile phone/cellphone] didn’t want to work so far away from our country, because he hadn’t ordered any option to make calls there[abroad/on the continent]. My father decided to stop the any car in case of asking[any car passing by in order to ask ] for help. The first man to be stopped didn’t speak English but managed to understand we needed his mobile. We called some car assistance [the car rescue service] and awaiting for them was the only thing we could do next. The assistance arrived within an hour. We needed to have our car repaired what lasted at [, which took] about 5 hours. We didn’t manage to finish our journey that day, so decided to sleep in [stay at] a hotel.

After a sleepless night our journey resumed. We reached Croatia with no further problems and found our hotel, ready for having 13 lazy days with the sun shining above us. After those two weeks mentioned we were blissfully happy to come back home without any complications.

Have a nice day!

Thanks a lot, I appreciate that.