I need to invite church members to participate in our event. I want them to response positively and have the willing to help me. Would you please help me write this in a polite and attractive way? Thank you very much in advance for your help.

Dear church members:

The Community Development Department of ABC is making an effort to help create a bonded community and stabilize current businesses. To that end, the City is planning to hold our first Spring Festival on the Historic Powder Springs Town Square, to be held in April 1, 2007.

I'm writing to invite you, the members of First Baptist Church to participate in our exciting event. To be able to make this event successful, we need your support in our musical part of the event. We believe that by participating in these event you will not only showcase your talents, but also render a valuable community service to the citizens.

One behalf of the Community Development, I thank you for your consideration of this request, and I look forward to hearing from you and seeing you in this exciting event. If you have any questions, or need further clarification, please do not hesitate to contact me at xxx-xxx-xxxx or email me at Email Removed">Email Removed

Sincerely yours,
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Nancy19820I need to invite church members to participate in our event. I want them to respond positively and be willing to help me. Would you please help me write this in a polite and attractive way? Thank you very much in advance for your help.

Dear church members [you know what church you are writing to so: Members of the First Baptist Church,]:

The Community Development Department of ABC is making an effort to help create a bonded an active and cohesive/cooperative community and stabilize current aims to encourage local businesses. To that end, the City is planning to hold our its first Spring Festival in the historic Powder Springs Town Square, to be held in on April 1, 2007.

I'm writing to invite you, the members of First Baptist Church, to participate in our this exciting event. To be able to make this event successfulTo ensure its success, we need your support in our musical part of the event. We believe that by participating in these event you will not only showcase your talents, but also render a valuable community service to the citizens.We would like to suggest that you provide part of the music for the event, and would be interested in what you would be able to do.


One behalf of the Community Development Department, I thank you in advance for your consideration of this request, and I look forward to hearing from you and, I hope, seeing you in this exciting event. If you have any questions, or need further clarification, please do not hesitate to contact me at xxx-xxx-xxxx or email me at Email Removed">Email Removed

Sincerely yours,Yours faithfully,

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