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There are some possible ways to prevent this virus from spreading further. It is about people's self-awareness about this disease, people need to read more, know more about the dangerous, the way to stay safe and the symptoms of the infected. By providing more information through media, TV, social networks,.. people could identify the symptoms of the infected and then report to the police to quarantine the infected. Furthermore, we need to motivate people to use face mask and soap everyday to avoid spreading virus to others.

The government should advise citizens to avoid going to populated areas and countries which have become dangerous because of infected people living there, moreover, restricting foreigners go to our country is a suitable action although it may decrease our economy growth a little bit. They should also invest money for making more hospital and providing more food, medicine for people who are self-quarantine in their home.

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Topic: Write the body of the essay " nCovid-19 is a dangerous epidemic worldwide. What can be done to protect people from this disease"

My essay:

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There are some possible ways to prevent this virus from spreading further. It is about people's self-awareness (Self-awareness is incorrect. ) about this disease, (Incorrect punctuation. Comma splice error.) people need to read more, know more about the dangerous, (wrong word. Dangerous is an adjective.) the way to stay safe and the symptoms of the if one is infected. By providing more information through media, TV, social networks,.. (Do not use ellipses or "etc." or phrases like "and so on" in formal essays.) people could identify the symptoms of the infected and then report infected people to the police to quarantine them. the infected. Furthermore, we need to motivate people to use wear a face mask and wash their hands thoroughly with soap several times a day soap everyday to avoid spreading the virus to others.

The government should advise citizens to avoid going to crowded places populated areas and countries which have become dangerous because of infected people living there, (Incorrect punctuation. Comma splice error.) moreover, restricting foreigners go coming in to our country is a suitable action although it may decrease our economy (wrong form. Economy is a noun.) growth a little bit. They should also invest money for making more hospital (wrong form. It takes years to build a hospital. How will this help in the next month or two?) and providing more food, medicine (ungrammatical structure) for people who are self-quarantine themselves in their home.

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