Good day,

Kindly requested to provide an update on status of the projects in Q1

Best regards,

kindly requested is very poor English. Just say 'Please'.

Good day, In my many years in business, we never started an email like this. Email is meant to be a quick and simple way to give and get information

Regards Same comment as above. Just a simple 'thanks' is enough.

Please provide me with a status update for each of your projects in the first quarter. One page per project, no later than Monday, 8th July.

Thank you