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Currently, I was in Can Tho University in Vietnam therefore I known about The Life in City with advantages and disadvantages. About advantages, There are lots of entertainment in there. I can play in Gaming Center or hang out with my friends in Karaoke net or Malls that I can’t do it in The Countryside. They make me happy everyday. Moreover, brilliant lights on buildings in the night that make whole the city wonderful. However, There are some disadvantages in The Life in City. First, The Life in City is more insecure than The Life in Countryside. I have alertness because there are many social ills in City Life such as robbery, murder, prostitution,...etc. Second, Traffic accidents are becoming a serious problem Specifically in Viet Nam. According to robust study of News in Viet Nam, There are 8248 persons who died because of traffic accidents in 2018. Summary, The Life in City have either advantages or disadvantages.

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1 Currently, I was in Can Tho University in Vietnam therefore I known about The L life in the city with its advantages and disadvantages.

  • Fix tense problems.

2 About advantages, There are lots of entertainment in there. I can play in Gaming Center or hang out with my friends in Karaoke net or Malls that I can’t do it , which I can't do in The Countryside.

  • Review capitalization rules for sentences, regions, proper nouns, titles, etc.
  • First of all, I want to tell you about the advantages.
  • Concerning the advantages, ....

3 They make me happy everyday. Moreover, brilliant lights on buildings in the night that make the whole the city look wonderful.

  • Review the use of articles (a/an/the/-)
  • Review clauses with that and which.

4 However, There are some disadvantages in city life. The Life in City. First, The Life inCity living in the city/an urban area is more insecure than living in the countryside. The Life in Countryside.

  • Review how to use gerunds.
  • Check a dictionary for synonyms and ways to paraphrase ideas.

5 I have alertness have to stay alert because there are many social ills in City Life the city, such as robbery, murder, and prostitution,...etc.

  • social ills and crime?

6 Second, Traffic accidents are becoming a serious problem, especially? Specifically in Hanoi? Viet Nam.

  • Viet Nam or Vietnam - use one style
  • Since your topic is city problems, you should mention a city name, such as Hanoi, for example.

7 According to a robust study of News in Viet Nam, There are were 8248 persons who died because of traffic accidents in 2018.

8 In sSummary, The Life in City city living/living in a city/city life have (3rd person singular = has) either advantages or disadvantages.

  • In summary,To summarize, in conclusion
  • Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
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