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to adapt to today's ever-changing and demanding world, you need to have certain skills, some of which are English proficiency. First and foremost, English is a language spoken by most people across the globe, so that if you were fluent in English, it will be easier for you to travel and experience new cultures. Secondly, English mastery brings significant benefits to those who want to study abroad. Top universities around the world such as Harvard, Cambridge, so on, they all demand English certificate such as IELTS, SAT, etc. To summarize, these reasons which aforesaid are helping you know more about a plenitude of benefits that English can bring to you.

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WRITE A PARAGRAPH OF 150 WORDS ABOUT THE TOPIC: WHAT IS A VERY IMPORTANT SKILL A PERSON SHOULD LEARN?


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to adapt to today's ever-changing and demanding world, you need to have certain skills, some of which are English proficiency. (English proficiency is singular.) First and foremost, English is a language spoken by most people across the globe, so that if you were are fluent in English, it will be easier for you to travel and experience new cultures. Secondly, Second, English mastery brings significant benefits to those who want to study abroad. Top universities around the world such as Harvard, Cambridge, so on, (I do not know a university names "so on". Do not use such expressions in formal writing.) they all demand a high score on English exams certificate such as IELTS, SAT, etc. (Do not use "etc." or "..." or "and so on " in formal writing. The SAT is not an English proficiency test. ) To summarize, these reasons which aforesaid (Do not use "aforesaid" or "aforementioned". Remove these words from your vocabulary lists) are helping you know more about the many a plenitude of benefits that knowledge of English can bring to you.