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People have different views about whether or not young people should be given homework. While it is argued that against the setting of homework, I still believe that they bring about a range of essential for education.

To begin with, there are several reasons why people think children do not engage in an assignment which is a burden on children. Firstly, children normally deal with exercise overloads of knowledge at their school as well as examination, which should consume their time. For example, countries such as Finland, where school children do not have homework, but they still stay in the top international education league. Secondly, many parents would argue that the school day is already enough for children and leave they should spend time on family and other activities. For instance, they should have spare time to learn soft-skills which would be necessary when they grow up or participate in some sport that they have a passion about.

Despite these arguments described above, I still believe that children should be encouraged in doing their homework. The main reason is that they may broaden their knowledge by they are able to independent learning or problem solving, as children are doing their task alone and in their own space. By doing their homework, children would have a deeper understanding of studying in class. To prove that, children at primary school, when they review some English vocabulary would memorize better at home compared to a student who does not make a revision.

To sum up, although children may have beneficial without homework in some cases, I still believe that parents should let their children doing homework is the best way to gain a wealth of knowledge.

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People have different views about whether or not young people should be given homework. While it is argued that against the setting of homework, I still believe that they (Young people bring this? wrong antecedent ) bring about a range of essential (wrong usage. Essential is an adjective. You cannot use it as a noun.) for education.

To begin with, there are several reasons why people think children do not engage in an assignment (wrong expression. This is not good English. ) which is a burden on children. Firstly, First, children normally deal with exercise overloads (wrong expression. This is not good English. ) of knowledge at their school as well as examination, (wrong form) which should consume their time. For example, in countries such as Finland, where school children do not have homework, but they still stay in the top international education league. (wrong expression. This is not good English. ) Secondly, Second, many parents would argue that the school day is already long enough for children and leave (wrong word) they should spend time on family and other activities. For instance, they should have spare time to learn soft-skills (wrong form - no hyphen) which would be necessary when they grow up or participate in some sport that they have a passion about.

Despite these arguments described above, I still believe that children should be encouraged in doing their homework. The main reason is that they may broaden their knowledge when they learn the class material and solve problems on their own by they are able to independent learning or problem solving, (wrong usage - a main clause is never used as an object of a preposition. ) as children are doing their task alone and in their own space. By doing their homework, children would have a deeper understanding of their lessons. studying in class. To prove that, One proof of this is children at primary school; if they review some English vocabulary words at home, they would memorize them better at home compared to than those who do not. a student who does not make a revision.

To sum up, although children may have beneficial (wrong usage. Beneficial is an adjective. You cannot use it as a noun.) without homework in some cases, I still believe that parents should let their children doing (wrong form) homework. That is the best way to gain a wealth of knowledge.