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Dear teacher,

Please correct the following two sentences.

1. Two days ago, when I was in my way home in the evening,

there was a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson fire and water have no mercy.
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Hi,

1. Two days ago, when I was in my way home in the evening,

there was a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson fire and water have no mercy.

1. Two evenings ago, when I was in my way home,
there was a fire in my neighborhood.



2. This event taught us a lesson: fire and water have no mercy.

Clive
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1. Two days ago, when I was on my way home in the evening, there was a fire in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson: fire and water have no mercy.
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Dear Clive,

Thanks for your correcton. It helps me a lot.

Contiluo
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Dear Docguruj,

Thanks for your correction. It helps me a lot.

Contiluo

Hi Contiluo,

1. Two days ago, when I was on the way to my home in the evening,

there was a fire event occuring in my neighborhood.

2. This event gives us a lesson that fire and water have no mercy.

Regards,

sri