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I think it is good for robots to take the place of human's jobs. The number of people who are young and can work has been decreasing, while that of people who are elder and have difficulty working has been increasing all around the world. Therefore, you should use robots in order to have them do simple work. However, it causes a decrease in jobs people can choose. So, you have to use robots carefully.

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I think it is good for robots to take the place of humans for certain jobs. 's jobs. (The robot is replacing a human, not a job.) The number of people who are young and can work has been decreasing, while that of people who are elder (wrong word) and have difficulty working has been increasing all around the world. Therefore, you (Who is "you"?) should use robots in order to have them to do simple, repetitive work. However, it this will lead to causes a decrease in jobs people can choose from. So, you have to use robots carefully.

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