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Recently, more and more people choose English centers as their reliable places of learning English. Though this seems encouraging learners to study in general, it has its own drawbacks which are both discussed in this essay.

On the one hand, English centers give learners opportunities to interact with native speakers, which is really attractive because many schools in Vietnam provide not enough environment to practice English. For example, at schools, most teachers are Vietnamese so they use their mother tongue as teaching language and have difficulty pronouncing English words. Unfortunately, students are likely to intimate them and create bad habits. As a result, students may lack confidence when it comes to listening and speaking skills. English centers have them lean with all for basic skills, which satisfy their needs to master the language. Plus, that culture of English speaking countries are taught makes lessons more appealing.

On the other hand, there are some downsides caused by this type of English institutions. A large number of learners attend different courses hold by these centers, which means they earn huge amount of money. This may lead them to aim only at promising commercial aspects instead of passion for teaching. For instance, some centers take advantages of desire to learn the language in a short period of time with ear-catching mottos such as "Achieve 7.0 IELTS score in a course", "Speak English fluently within 6 moths", etc. Learners should stay alert to avoid these marketing schemes and invest money as well as time in centers which guarantee quality.

In short, English centers have played an important part in terms of teaching English in Vietnam providing all-round skills but also raise concerns of becoming business focus.

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English centers have supported Vietnamese learners of English in their study but there have been certain problems. What are the benefits of English centers and what are the problems caused by them?


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Recently, (Use the present progressive tense, not adverbs, for present time.) More and more people are choosing choose English centers as a good place to learn English. their reliable places of learning English. (Reliable is more for people, not a place.) Though these centers have many successful graduates who are fluent in English, they have associated problems, especially in making unrealistic promises to students. . this seems encouraging learners (I don't know what you mean. ) to study in general, it has its own drawbacks which are both discussed in this essay.

(It is very poor form to mention your essay. Write a thesis statement that gives the main points.

On the one hand, English centers are very effective in teaching English. (You need a topic statement for each paragraph) In contrast with schools, they give their students learners opportunities to interact with native speakers, which is really attractive because many schools in Vietnam do not offer this. provide not enough environment to practice English. For example, at In these schools, most teachers are Vietnamese so they use their mother tongue when teaching English as teaching language and have difficulty pronouncing English words. Unfortunately, students are likely to intimate them and create bad habits. As a result, students may not develop adequate lack confidence when it comes to listening and speaking skills. English centers have them lean with all for basic skills, (That does not make sense.)which satisfy their needs enables them to master the language. Plus, that the culture of English-speaking countries are taught makes lessons more appealing.

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On the other hand, there are some downsides associated with caused by (wrong verb) this type of English institutions. (wrong form) A large number of their students learners attend different courses hold (wrong verb form) by these centers, which means they have the qualification to earn high salaries if they apply themselves. huge amount of money. (Since when is a good salary a disadvantage or a bad thing?) This may lead them to aim only at promising commercial aspects instead of passion for teaching. (I do not understand your point. The students are not teachers.) For instance, some centers take advantages (wrong form) of people's desire to learn the language in a short period of time with ear-catching mottos advertising slogans such as "Achieve 7.0 IELTS score after only one in a course", and "Speak English fluently within 6 moths", etc. (Do not use "etc." or "..." or phrases such as "and so on" in formal writing.) Learners Prospective students should stay alert to avoid these marketing schemes and invest use their money as well as time in centers which do not make outlandish promises. guarantee quality.

In short, English centers have played an important part in terms of teaching English in Vietnam providing all-round skills but also raise concerns of becoming business focus. (Unnatural. I do not know what you mean.)

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