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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Do you agree or disagree?


It is argued that the most effective solution to tackle environmental issues is the increase in fuel prices. While I accept that the measure could bring many positive influences in the short-term period, I partly believe that the raise environmental awareness of inhabitants is more important to combat this global problem.

To start with, raising fuel costs such as petrol, oil, and natural gases could help address environmental issues in the world currently. Industrial sectors especially fossil fuel power plants ought to find alternative energy sources inclusive nuclear and renewable to replace. This would lead to fewer greenhouse gases and emissions which are released into the atmosphere as well as to mitigate global warming and pollution. Another reason is that the rise in fuel prices that make commuting costs rise significantly. People who live downtown tend to use public transportations, carpool, or cycle to work instead of driving private cars. Therefore, this could also help reduce the number of exhaust fumes produced in the environment.

On the other hand, rising fuel costs are not the best approach to deal with the global environment. This is because, in recent years, the cost of fuel is enormously rising however the number of personal automobiles still keeps at an alarming rate. Moreover, educating the citizens about the cruciality of protecting the Earth will address and mitigate environmental concerns. When people have full awareness of this, they are willing to take action to save the natural environment and other related issues. For instance, individuals will attend environmental protection programs where healthy lifestyles are encouraged and people's connection in the community is heightened.

In conclusion, although the increasing fuel costs could somewhat contribute to environmental conditions, it seems to me that improving people’s environmental protection consciousness is by far the most practical solution.

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It is argued that the most effective solution to tackle environmental issues is the to increase in fuel prices. While I accept that the measure could bring many positive influences in the short-term period, I partly believe (wrong word) that the raise raising the environmental awareness of inhabitants is more important to combat this global problem.


The prompt is: " To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? "

You partly believed something else (environmental awareness), not the statement (raising petrol prices).
You do not partly believe your own solution, you believe it completely. Otherwise, why would you propose it?

So you did not answer the question correctly, which will cost you some points. Here are some examples of how you can answer clearly and precisely:

I somewhat agree that this could be a good approach. While it could bring many positive effects in the short-term, raising peoples' environmental awareness is a much better way to combat this global problem.

I have to disagree with the statement. Although there may be some short-term benefits, raising peoples' environmental awareness is a significantly better way to combat this global problem.



To start with, raising fuel costs of fuels such as petrol, oil, and natural gas gases could help address environmental issues in the world currently. Industrial sectors Industries, especially fossil fuel power plants, ought to find alternative energy sources inclusive like nuclear power and renewables to replace coal and oil. This would lead to fewer greenhouse gases and other emissions which are released into the atmosphere. Less greenhouse gasses slows as well as to mitigate global warming and pollution. Another reason is that the rise in fuel prices that make commuting costs rise significantly. People who live downtown tend to use public transportations, (wrong form. Transportation is non-count) carpools, or bicycles to get to work instead of driving private cars. Therefore, this could also help reduce the number of exhaust fumes produced in released into the environment. (I do not follow your logic. It does not make sense. I think you meant that people will want lower their commuting costs, so they will use other means of transportation to get to work. Or did you mean that people who live in the suburbs will sell their homes and move to the city center?)

On the other hand, rising fuel costs are not the best approach to deal with these problems global environment. This is because, in recent years, the cost of fuel has been going up, but is enormously rising however the number of personal automobiles still keeps increasing at an alarming rate. Moreover, educating the citizens about the importance cruciality of protecting the Earth will address and mitigate environmental concerns. When people have full awareness of this, they are willing to take action to save the natural environment and forestall climate change. other related issues. For instance, individuals will attend environmental protection programs where healthy lifestyles are encouraged and people's connection in to the community is strengthened. heightened.

In conclusion, although the increasing fuel costs could somewhat contribute to improve environmental conditions, it seems to me that educating people on the subject of improving people’s environmental protection consciousness is by far the most practical solution.

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Do you agree or disagree?

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