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Task 1: The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.

The provided chart compares the daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 and N2O which caused pollution in 4 different cities ( LA, Calcutta, Beijing, Mexico City) in the year 2000. The unit are measured in microgram per m3.

Overall, it is readily apparent that Mexico City was the dominance of both minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants while the lowest maximum levels of SO2 can be seen from Los Angeles and that of N2O belonged to Beijing.

To be specific, in Los Angeles , the quantity of SO2 emitted into the atmosphere was the lowest of all cities with the minimum level of 2 micrograms per m3 and the maximum average of 10 micrograms. It also of note that the amount of N2O emissions was far higher with the peak of 104 micrograms for maximum level and 39 micrograms for minimum one. With regards to Calcutta, the figures of both air pollutants were relatively equivalent. Its daily average of SO2 was 47 and 59 micrograms,respectively. The similar pattern could be seen from the figures of NO2 with the minimum and maximum levels of 30 and 52 micrograms per m3, respectively.

In terms of Beijing, the daily maximum level of SO2 reached the highest point of 100, which was 4 times higher than the minimum level. The figures for NO2 were minimum at 14 and maximum at 54 micrograms. Mexico City with the maximum level of NO2 of 207 micrograms, following by that of SO2 of 200 microgram , approximately doubled the minimum of both emissions with 113 and 80 micrograms , respectively.

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Task 1: The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.

The provided chart compares the daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 and N2O which caused pollution in 4 different cities ( LA, Calcutta, Beijing, Mexico City) in the year 2000. The unit are measured in microgram per m3.

Overall, it is readily apparent that Mexico City was the dominace of both minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants while the lowest maximum levels of SO2 can be seen from Los Angeles and that of N2O belonged to Beijing.

To be specific, in Los Angeles , the quantity of SO2 emitted into the atmosphere was the lowest of all cities with the minimum level of 2 micrograms per m3 and the maximum average of 10 micrograms. It also of note that the amount of N2O emissions was far higher with the peak of 104 micrograms for maximum level and 39 micrograms for minimum one. With regards to Calcutta, the figures of both air pollutants were relatively equivalent. Its daily average of SO2 was 47 and 59 micrograms,respectively. The similar pattern could be seen from the figures of NO2 with the minimum and maximum levels of 30 and 52 micrograms per m3, respectively.

In terms of Beijing, the daily maximum level of SO2 reached the highest point of 100, which was 4 times higher than the minimum level. The figures for NO2 were minimum at 14 and maximum at 54 micrograms. Mexico City with the maximum level of NO2 of 207 micrograms, following by that of SO2 of 200 microgram , approximately doubled the minimum of both emisions with 113 and 80 micrograms, respectively.

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