The illustrations indicate salmon's cycle of life, which is categorized among the large fish, in three stages.


Firstly, due to the slow movement of water in the upper river, salmon eggs get a chance to attach to small stones which are located close to reeds. They spend around 5 to 6 months there. Then, fries that are about 3 to 8 cm grow out of those eggs. They move to the fast-moving lower river afterwards and live there for an approximate four-year period. After this duration, they have grown to about one-fifth of the size of adult salmon's (12 to 15 cm) and are called smolts. Smolts spend about five years in open sea and reach maturity soon after. Adult salmons, which are more than 70 cm long, begin mating and breeding. The female salmons,then, lay their eggs near the reeds and another cycle begins.


Over all, it is clear that salmons need about nine and a half years to reach adulthood and in this period of time they grow from fries (3-8 cm each) to adults salmons (70-76 cm each). In addition, salmon lives in three different areas in its life namely: upper river, lower river and open sea.


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The illustrations indicate given diagram depicts the life cycle of the salmon – a large species of fish. cycle of life, which is categorized among the large fish, in three stages. There are three main stages in the life of a salmon.

Firstly, due to the slow movement of water in the upper river parts/reaches, salmon eggs get a chance to attach to small stones which are located close to reeds. They spend around 5 to 6 months there. Then, they hatch into fries fry(1) that are grow to about 3 to 8 cm in length. grow out of those eggs. They move to the fast-moving lower river afterwards and live there for an approximate four-year period. After this duration, they have grown to about one-fifth of the size of an adult salmon (12 to 15 cm) and are called smolts. Smolts spend about five years in the open sea and reach maturity soon after. Adult (2)salmon, which are more than 70 cm long, then migrate back to the rivers where they begin mating and breeding. The female salmon then lay their eggs near the reeds and another cycle begins.

Over all, it is clear that salmon need about nine and a half years to reach adulthood and in this period of time they grow from fries fry (3-8 cm each) to adult salmon (70-76 cm each). In addition, salmon live lives in three different areas habitats in its life throughout their lives namely: upper parts/reaches of rivers, lower river sections and open seas.

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1- “fry” (in the sense of small fish) is not countable.

2- Although some consider fish types to be countable, I prefer to consider them uncountable.

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The illustrations indicate (wrong word) the salmon's cycle of life, which is categorized among the large fish, (life is not categorized as a fish. You have misplaced this clause.) in three stages.


Suggestion: The illustrations show the life cycle of the salmon (a large fish) which occurs in three main stages over about ten years in both fresh and salt water.

Note: Salmon, fry, and smolt are non-count nouns. "Fries" are the fried potatoes that you get in a fast-food restaurant.


Firstly, Salmon start their life as an egg laid in the upper reaches of a river. Due to the slow movement of water in the upper river, salmon eggs can get a chance to attach to small stones which are located close to reeds. They spend around 5 to 6 months there. Then, fries that are about 3 to 8 cm long grow out of those eggs. They move to the fast-moving lower river afterwards and live there for an approximate four-year period. After this duration, they have grown to about one-fifth of the size of the adult salmon's (12 to 15 cm) and are called smolts. (wrong form) Smolts Smolt spend about five years in the open sea and reach maturity there. soon after. Adult salmons, (wrong form) which are more than 70 cm long, swim from the sea to where they were born and begin mating and breeding. The female salmons,then, lay their eggs near the reeds and another cycle begins.

The "three stages" are not clearly indicated in your paragraph. Task 1 does not need a concluding paragraph. You are not arguing a point that requires a summary. In Task 2, this is required.

Over all, it is clear that salmons need about nine and a half years to reach adulthood and in this period of time they grow from fries (3-8 cm each) to adults salmons (70-76 cm each). In addition, salmon lives in three different areas in its life namely: upper river, lower river and open sea.

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AlpheccaStarssmolts. (wrong form) Smolts Smolt

That may be the case in AmE. In other varieties, "smolts" is okay.

https://www.lexico.com/en/definition/smolt