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The diagram shows the difference between the current layout of the ground floor of a house and the new design proposal. Overall, the proposed design involves making numerous changes, mainly in the central hall area. Especially the position of the doors, stairs and the size of the living room.
The most noticeable change from the existing to the new plan is there will be no longer a separate hall area. This is because of removing the internal wall and the door between the lobby area and the living room. Otherwise, the stairs and storage under the stairs will be demolished. The living room will be enlarged and contain more stairs.
The new winding stairs in the corner of the living room will replace the straight stairs. The double door connecting the kitchen and living room will be installed, The proposed changes also include the addition of some kitchen furniture. There are no changes in external walls or entrances.
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The diagram shows the difference between the current layout of the ground floor of a house and
thea new design proposal. Overall, the proposed design involves making numerous changes, mainly in the central hall area, especially the position of the doors, stairs and the size of the living room.The most noticeable change
from the existing to the new planis that there will be no longer a separate hall areaThis isbecauseof removingthe internal wall and the door between thelobbyhall area and the living room will be removed.Otherwise,Moreover, the existing stairs and storage under the stairs will be gone.demolished. Thus, the living room will be enlarged.and contain more stairs.TheA newwinding stairsspiral staircase will be installed in the top left corner of the living room, replacing the doors there.will replace the straight stairs. TheA double door connecting the kitchen and living room will also be installed. The proposed changes also include the addition of some kitchen furniture. There are no changesinproposed for the external walls or entrances.