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Topic: increases in the production of consumer goods result in damage to the natural environment. why this the case? what can be done to solve?

It is true that, in recent years, consumer products increasingly manufactured cause a great deal of the detrimental effects on natural habitat. while there are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon, several solutions are able to be adopted by governments to deal with the situation.

There are consistently reasons why the production of more and more spender products is resulting in an ecosystem crisis. Firstly in order to maximize profits and meet the demand of consumer market, corporations are, therefore, depleting natural resources. For example, Energy is required for all production processes, and so the search for types of fuel such as gas and oil has led to habitat destruction as well as repeated oil spills. Secondly, by rising production, a load of industrial factories is able to release a large amount of toxic waste into our environment in the manufacturing process of different consumer goods such as dyed fabrics or detergents. Finally, provided that the packaging of spender products is made by diversely plastic materials, it would make them look more attractive. However, a huge volume of plastic rubbish is simply dumped in public and even in the river.

Governments or individuals should take into consideration some following measures to alleviate such environmental problems. In terms of energy management, public subsidies must be offered for the expansion of renewable energy. In Europe, instead of using fossil fuel in the manufacture, offshore wind farms generate a significant contribution to meet the needs of energy. From the perspective of reducing waste and limiting contamination. Government should allocate their resources to evironmental researches, this encourages scientists discover bio-degradable materials. In addition, leaders should exert pressure on producers to cut down on emissions from factories.

In the nutshell, while some reasons are identified to explain this problem, effective measures are available and must be imposed to make the production of consumer goods more environmentally friendly.

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It is true that, (Those words do not have any content. Would you write something that is untrue?) In recent years, consumer products increasingly manufactured (wrong expression) cause a great deal of the detrimental effects on natural habitats. while (wrong punctuation) there are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon, (wrong word) several solutions are able to be adopted by governments to deal with the situation. (That is too vague. Every problem has reasons and solutions. You could write this same sentence in almost every discussion essay. The examiners are looking for flexibility in your writing. )

There are consistently (wrong word) reasons why the production of more and more spender (wrong word) products is resulting in an ecosystem crisis. Firstly First, in order to maximize profits and meet the demands of the consumer market, corporations are, therefore, (wrong word) depleting natural resources. For example, Energy is required for all production processes, and so the search for types of fuel such as gas and oil has led to habitat destruction as well as repeated oil spills. Secondly, Second, by rising (wrong word) raising the levels of production, a load of (wrong expression) industrial factories is (wrong form) able to releasing a large amount of toxic waste into our environment in the manufacturing process of different consumer goods such as dyed fabrics or detergents. Finally, provided that (wrong expression) the packaging of spender (wrong word) products is made by diversely (wrong word) plastic materials, it would make them look more attractive. However, a huge this excess material volume of plastic rubbish is simply dumped in public (wrong expression) and even in the river.

Governments or individuals should take into consideration some following measures to alleviate such environmental problems. In terms of energy management, public subsidies must be offered for the expansion of renewable energy. In Europe, instead of using fossil fuel in manufacturing, the manufacture, offshore wind farms generate a significant contribution to meet their energy needs of energy. From the perspective of reducing waste and limiting pollutants, contamination. Government should allocate their resources to evironmental researches, (wrong form) research. This encourages scientists to discover bio-degradable materials. In addition, leaders should exert pressure on producers to cut down on emissions from factories.

In the nutshell, (Wrong expression. This is informal and should not be used in formal essays.) In conclusion, unnecessary packaging and lack of environmental regulations cause this problem, but , hile some reasons are identified to explain this problem, effective measures are available and must be imposed to make the production of consumer goods more environmentally friendly.

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