Topic:

Some feel that good entertainers are as important to society as scientists.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have sparked the controversy of the role of good entertainers, whether they bring benefits as scientists do. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that they are as essential to society as scientists.

Similar to scientists who invent innovations for human beings, entertainers bring fun for them through many kinds of recreational activities, making life more comfortable. Everyone regardless of job and status can not live without entertainment. For instance, scientists also need to relax after intensive work hours like ordinary people. Entertainment helps to counteract stress and tension in modern life. Moreover, a lack of beautiful music or good movies sounds to be banal.

Not only scientists contribute to the development of a country but also entertainers. Scientists do much research to create inventions. For example, medical researchers sought out the Covid 19 vaccines, gaining fame for their country’s science. Similarly, entertainers like singers or actors represent a nation’s culture and identity. For instance, K-pop stars and K-drama actors play an integral part in spreading rapidly the Korean culture, known as the Hallyu wave, throughout different nations, thereby increasing the general national gross. Moreover, if entertainers are nominated for the Grammy or Oscar award, their country will be famous. A good entertainer is among the most influential figures to the general public due to their prevalence, result in positive impacts on citizens’ perception.

In conclusion, good entertainers should be considered as a radical factor of social and economic development. Government should invest in entertainment as well as science to attain a comprehensive target.

Topic:

Some feel that good entertainers are as important to society as scientists.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have sparked the controversy of the role of good entertainers, whether they bring benefits as scientists do. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that they are as essential to society as scientists.

Similar to scientists who invent innovations for human beings, entertainers bring fun for them through many kinds of recreational activities, making life more comfortable. Everyone regardless of job and status can not live without entertainment. For instance, scientists also need to relax after intensive work hours like ordinary people. Entertainment helps to counteract stress and tension in modern life. Moreover, a lack of beautiful music or good movies sounds to be banal.

Not only scientists contribute to the development of a country but also entertainers. Scientists do much research to create inventions. For example, medical researchers sought out the Covid 19 vaccines, gaining fame for their country’s science. Similarly, entertainers like singers or actors represent a nation’s culture and identity. For instance, K-pop stars and K-drama actors play an integral part in spreading rapidly the Korean culture, known as the Hallyu wave, throughout different nations, thereby increasing the general national gross. Moreover, if entertainers are nominated for the Grammy or Oscar award, their country will be famous. A good entertainer is among the most influential figures to the general public due to their prevalence, result in positive impacts on citizens’ perception.

In conclusion, good entertainers should be considered as a radical factor of social and economic development. Government should invest in entertainment as well as science to attain a comprehensive target.

Nowadays, people have sparked the controversy (This is a memorized response. There is no controversy. There is no debate. The examiner will not reward a memorized response. They look for a sentence that convinces them that you have read and understood the topic.) of the role of good entertainers, whether they bring benefits as scientists do. In my opinion, (Agree is an opinion, so this phrase is redundant.) I agree with the idea that they are as essential to society as scientists.


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Similar to scientists who invent innovations (wrong word) for us human beings, entertainers bring fun for them through many kinds of recreational activities, making life more comfortable. Everyone, regardless of job and or social status, can not live without entertainment. For instance, scientists also need to relax after intensive work hours like ordinary people. Entertainment helps to counteract stress and tension in modern life. Moreover, a lack of beautiful music or good movies sounds to be banal. (That makes no sense.)

Not only scientists contribute to the development of a country but also entertainers. Scientists do much research to create inventions. For example, medical researchers sought out the Covid 19 vaccines, gaining fame for their country. ’s science. Similarly, entertainers like singers or actors represent a nation’s culture and identity. For instance, K-pop stars and K-drama actors play an integral part in spreading rapidly the Korean culture, known as the Hallyu wave, (Hallyu wave is not the same as Korean culture it is a trend among Asian people..) throughout different nations, thereby increasing the general national gross. (wrong phrase) Moreover, if entertainers are nominated for the Grammy or Oscar award, their country will be famous. A good entertainer is among the most influential figures to the general public due to their prevalence, result in positive impacts on citizens’ perception. (The sentence is not grammatical. It is not good English.)

In conclusion, good entertainers should be considered as a radical (wrong word) factor of social and economic development. Government should invest in entertainment as well as science (That is off-topic. It is not about the government and economic growth, but benefits to society). to attain their economic targets. a comprehensive target.