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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, fast food is very popular. However, most of the menu items are not beneficial for people’s health. I strong believe people’s health risk which highly relates to this kind of food. I totally agree that the government should increase taxes on junk food.
I strong believe that imposing a heavy tax for this kind of food and that can reduce the number of health problems for people. First, the fast food has the most calories, this leads to obese or heart problems. For example, nowadays, young people normally eat more types of fat which has on fast food, so they have some diseases related to obese or heart. Second, the government to impose a tax on junk food which has a few benefits. The taxes can be used to raise awareness of the harmful effects of junk food. For instance, officials in India’s southern state of Kerala have placed a tax on fast food, at 14.5 percent, at restaurants such as Pizza Huts, Kentucky Fried Chicken, hamburger joints.
However, taxes on junk food brings some negative. Governments in some countries are not imposing a tax for a fast food restaurant because it will limit the number of customers who buy fast food. For instance, the government to impose a higher tax for fat and sugar which has in fast food and them increase the problems of obesity and heart diseases in some countries
In conclusion, fast food can help people save their time when people are very busy. However, I would agree that governments should be imposing a hefty tax for fast food because when people have a high consumption of junk and unhealthy food, it causes some diseases like obesity and cardiovascular disease.
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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, fast food is very popular. However, most of the menu items are not beneficial for people’s health. I strong believe that people’s the risk of poor health risk which highly relates is highly correlated with this kind of food. I totally agree that the government should increase taxes on junk food.


I strongly believe that imposing a heavy tax on for this kind of food will have two benefits. First, it will reduce the number of health problems in the general population. If unhealthy food is very expensive and healthy food is cheap, people will naturally buy and eat less unhealthy food. for people. First, the Fast food has high level of saturated fats which are associated with the most calories, this leads to obesity and clogged arteries. Both are factors which cause the development of heart disease. For example, nowadays, young people normally eat more types of fat which has on fast food, so they have some diseases related to obese or heart. Second, the government to impose a tax on junk food which has a few benefits. The taxes can be used to raise awareness of the harmful effects of junk food. For instance, officials in India’s southern state of Kerala have placed a tax on fast food, at 14.5 percent, at restaurants such as Pizza Huts, Kentucky Fried Chicken, and hamburger joints. The extra income from taxes can be used to make advertisements for healthy eating. These advertisements can be posters placed in public places such as busses, schools, or sports arenas, TV spots on popular programs, or videos on the government web sites.


However, taxes on junk food brings some negative consequences. (I will let you find the problems in the rest of your essay.)

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Hello AlpheccaStars,
I am following your advice to correct the mistakes in my essays, you advise me should rewrite and fix my errors sentences and I fixed it. I think it is fine. However, I think I should learn again with simple sentences.
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Thank you for talking about the trouble to help me. I do appreciate it.

Please, can you tell me the information about my errors? , for example. I write it is very hard to understand or mistakes grammar. I will try to learn the basic class again.

What you write is not native English. There are many grammatical mistakes.

Trúc Ngọc For example, is what I write it is very hard to understand or do I make mistakes in the grammar?
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