Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?


It is believed that high school programmes should include non-profit community service such as doing charity and voluntary work. Personally, I think that it its a good idea which students can gain significant benefits from.

It is undeniable that there is a number of reasons that unpaid community service should not be included in school programmes. The first reason is that joining such service could have a negative impact on studying results of students. Those who take part in doing charity work tend to spend less time concentrating on learning at school, resulting in poor academic achievements. That can adversely affect their future when they enter university. Another reason for excluding activities for community in learning programmes is that high school students could experience early relationships, leading to unwanted consequences. This not only has a detrimental effect on their health but also on their emotion when they are still in process of maturing.

Despite some disadvantages of unpaid community service, I still think that if it is included in curriculum in high school, students can achieve more benefits from it. Firstly, students who participate in this kind of service in school will have a chance to improve their skills such as teamwork, communication and collaboration because they usually interact with other people, which helps them to be more successful in the future. In addition, involving in activities for community without payment would enhance students' awareness. Those who are exposed regularly with young children of poor living conditions are likely to sympathetic. Thanks to that, they understand how lucky they are, and try to become good citizens.

In conclusion, including non-profit community service in curriculum in high school will bring a well-rounded development to students.

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sam hoangPersonally, I think that it its a good idea which students can gain significant benefits from.

Hi Sam. You were not specifically asked to discuss advantages and disadvantages in this essay. Also, the positionyou seem to have taken indicates that you think it's a good idea. You didn't say that it's a good idea but it also has some shortcomings. You need to decide on which position to take, and then you can write the essay. So, what is it to be? Emotion: wink

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I agree that nonprofit community service should be included in high school programs.

While I accept that including nonprofit community service has some shortcomings, I still believe that it should be implemented by high schools.


It is my position.

sam hoangWhile I accept that including nonprofit community service has some shortcomings, I still believe that it should be implemented by high schools.
sam hoangIt This is my position.

Okay, that can work with those body paragraphs.

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On the one hand, it is sometimes argued [ 1] undeniable that there is a number of reasons that unpaid community service should not be included in school programmes. The first reason is that joining getting involved in such projects service could have a negative impact on studying academic performance and exam results of students. Those who take part in doing charity work tend to spend less time concentrating on their studies, which can lead to learning at school, resulting in poor academic achievements . That and can adversely affect their future when they finish school. enter university. Another reason for excluding against making such activities for community in learning programmes part of the school curriculum is that high school it is difficult to supervise students outside school, and their safety and security cannot always be guaranteed when they participate in such activities. could experience early relationships, leading to unwanted consequences. This Thus, any accidents or mishaps would not only have has a detrimental effect on their health but also on their emotions when they are still in the process of maturing.

Nevertheless, despite some disadvantages the above-mentioned drawbacks of unpaid community service, I still think that if it is included in the curriculum in high school, students can achieve derive more benefits from it. Firstly, students who participate in this kind of service in school will have a chance to improve their skills such as teamwork, communication and collaboration skills because they usually get to interact and collaborate with other people, which helps them to be more successful in the future. In addition, involving in activities doing unpaid work for the community without payment would enhance students' social awareness and sense of civil responsibility. Those who are exposed work regularly with young children of from poor living conditions backgrounds are likely to empathize with disadvantaged people in the community. sympathetic. Thanks to that, they understand how lucky they are and try to become good citizens.

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[ 1]: This paragraph is against your position. Therefore, do not use strong expressions such as “undeniable” in it.

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Now you can summarize your main findings in the conclusion. Do not write a general sentence in it.

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Here is my conclusion.

In conclusion, upaid community service can help students to improve their teamwork, communication and collaboration skills to become good citizens in the future, so I strongly hold the belief that it should be included in school curriculum.

That's good, but you could have also included the main points from the first body paragraph. See below.

sam hoang

In conclusion, although some may argue that it can distract students from their studies especially when not strictly supervised, unpaid community service can help students to improve their teamwork, communication and collaboration skills to become good citizens in the future, so I strongly hold the belief that it should be included in the school curriculum.

Thanks a lot, teacher.

I've learnt one more kind of essays. Awesome !!!:D

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