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Question: Extreme sports are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


In recent years, extreme sports have become very popular and some people argue that the government should prohibit them because of their dangers. I partly agree with this assertion as these sports are dangerous, but should not be banned.

In my opinion, these activities are hazardous. Each sport has its own “risk zones” which may be the nature in terms of extreme sports. Even when all safety precautions are taken, plenty of things can go wrong; therefore, extreme athletes put their lives in danger on a daily basis. Many suffer from severe injuries while performing these feats, and unfortunately, they can even lead to fatal incidents. For instance, over 30 people die every year during rock climbing alone.

While I support the idea that these sports are dangerous, I believe that it is wrong and almost impossible to ban them. Playing sports is everyone’s own choice as they are free to choose what kind of things they like to play. Taking up a sport means they are responsible for themselves and the risks they are going to take. Therefore, it is impractical for the government to control our interests in sports. In addition, extreme sports are healthy activities as any extreme sport requires us to be in great physical shape. While playing sports, we can get rid of negativity, and if we find ourselves in a pleasant, cheerful company, we can receive a constant charge of positive emotions.

In conclusion, everyone should be free of choice for playing extreme sports, but these activities must be done within reasonable limits.

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In recent years, extreme sports have become very popular and some people argue that the government should prohibit them because of their dangers. I partly agree with this assertion as these sports are dangerous, but they should not be banned.

Examples of thesis statements:

I admit that such activities are very dangerous, but totally disagree that the government should ban them.
Although participants can be seriously injured, I somewhat disagree that such activities should be completely outlawed; but they should be regulated and supervised with appropriate safety rules.

In my opinion, (Do not write your opinion in a body paragraph. Put the opinions in the introduction and the argument points in the body paragraphs. ) these activities are inherently hazardous. Each sport has its own “risk zones” which may be very broad in the case the nature in terms of extreme sports. Even when all safety precautions are taken, plenty (Plenty is too informal) any number of things can go wrong; therefore, extreme athletes put their lives in danger on a daily basis. Many suffer from severe injuries while performing these feats, and unfortunately, they can even lead to fatal incidents. For instance, over 30 people die every year during rock climbing alone.

While I support the idea that these sports are dangerous, I believe that it is wrong and almost impossible to ban them. Playing sports is everyone’s own choice as they are free to choose what kind of things they like to do. play. Taking up a sport means they are responsible for themselves accepting and the risks they entail. are going to take. Therefore, it is impractical ( better: unreasonable) for the government to control our interests in sports. In addition, extreme sports are healthy activities as any extreme sport (avoid repetition) requiring us to be in great physical shape. While playing sports, we can get rid of negativity, and if we find ourselves in a pleasant, cheerful company, we can receive a constant charge of positive emotions.

In conclusion, everyone should be free to choose to play of choice for playing extreme sports, but these activities must be done within reasonable limits. (Do not introduce new ideas in the conclusion.)