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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

There is argument that students will be better when they study with the only one teacher . On the other hand, some people think that New teachers for each year have more advantages . In my opinion , if students can learn with different teachers , they will gain more knowledge from them .

There are several reasons why people think that studying with same teacher have more benefits . First of all , those teacher who follow their students many years will know exactly their students' problem and their strengths so they can make a long-term plan for them to improve . Moreover , It's easy to contact and make friends with students that students will be more confident to ask their teacher help.

There are a great deal of advantages when students can study with various teachers every years. Firstly, some students can follow with some special teacher's method so they can't be more better . In addition , It's help students to learn how they can adopt with new people and new skills each years so they can improve with soft skills such as communication , team work and so on. The last but not least, students can explore which methods is suitable and can help them achieve their goal.

In conclusion, i believe that many teachers will bring more benefits for students than the only one .

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There is argument that students will be better when they study with the only one teacher . On the other hand, some people think that New teachers for each year have more advantages . In my opinion , if students can learn with different teachers , they will gain more knowledge from them .

There are several reasons why people think that studying with same teacher have more benefits . First of all , those teacher who follow their students many years will know exactly their students' problem and their strengths so they can make a long-term plan for them to improve . Moreover , It's easy to contact and make friends with students that students will be more confident to ask their teacher help.

There are a great deal of advantages when students can study with various teachers every years. Firstly, some students can follow with some special teacher's method so they can't be more better . In addition , It's help students to learn how they can adopt with new people and new skills each years so they can improve with soft skills such as communication , team work and so on. The last but not least, students can explore which methods is suitable and can help them achieve their goal.

In conclusion, i believe that many teachers will bring more benefits for students than the only one .

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