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I am studing English. Can you indicate my errors? Thank you for your comments.

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Dear Kathy,
Many thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't invited you to my mother's birthday party on the last Monday. I knew that you wasn't in the town last week because of the tour of Phu Quoc Island.
As you know, my mom has just 50 year old this year. Therefore, my father, my sister and I decided to hold a surprise birthday party as thanks to her love for my family. The party was organized at our home. In the afternoon, after my mother had finished her work at the office, my father pick up her by the car. While, my sister prepared dinner and I bought a birthday cake at a local store.
Because everyone was busy for work on Monday, we only invited my uncle, my ant and Tom, who is my sister's boy friend. Although it only was a small party, my mother was very happy.
Now, I guess in's time I got on with my study. I look forward to hearing about your trip soon.
Best wishes,
Tan

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Errors are marked in bold. If you want to try to fix them and post again ( to this thread, not to a new thread, please) I'll be happy to check this again.

Clive


Dear Kathy,
Many thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't invited you to my mother's birthday party on the last Monday. I knew that you wasn't in the town last week because of the tour of Phu Quoc Island.
As you know, my mom has just 50 year old this year. Therefore, my father, my sister and I decided to hold a surprise birthday party as thanks to her love for my family. The party was organized at our home. In the afternoon, after my mother had finished her work at the office, my father pick up her by the car. While, my sister prepared dinner and I bought a birthday cake at a local store.

Because everyone was busy for work on Monday, we only invited my uncle, my ant and Tom, who is my sister's boy friend. Although it only was a small party, my mother was very happy.
Now, I guess in's time I got on with my study. I look forward to hearing about your trip soon.
Best wishes,
Tan

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Clive

Errors are marked in bold. If you want to try to fix them and post again ( to this thread, not to a new thread, please) I'll be happy to check this again.

Clive


Dear Kathy,
Many thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't invited you to my mother's birthday party on the last Monday. I knew that you wasn't in the town last week because of the tour of Phu Quoc Island.
As you know, my mom has just 50 year old this year. Therefore, my father, my sister and I decided to hold a surprise birthday party as thanks to her love for my family. The party was organized at our home. In the afternoon, after my mother had finished her work at the office, my father pick up her by the car. While, my sister prepared dinner and I bought a birthday cake at a local store.

Because everyone was busy for work on Monday, we only invited my uncle, my ant and Tom, who is my sister's boy friend. Although it only was a small party, my mother was very happy.
Now, I guess in's time I got on with my study. I look forward to hearing about your trip soon.
Best wishes,
Tan

I really appreciate your help with my writting. I tried to fix errors which were marked in bold, but I can't know how to correct "I'm sorry I haven't invited you...". Would you mind clarifying this error for me, please?
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Dear Kathy,
Many thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't invited you to my mother's birthday party on last Monday. I knew that you were out of town last week because of the tour of Phu Quoc Island.
As you know, my mom has been just 50 years old this year. Therefore, my father, my sister and I decided to hold a surprise birthday party as thanks to her love for my family. The party was organized at our home. In the afternoon, after my mother had finished her work at the office, my father pick up her by a car. While my sister was preparing dinner and I bought a birthday cake at a local store.
Because everyone was busy working on Monday, we only invited my uncle, my aunt and Tom, who is my sister's boy friend. Although it only was a small party, my mother was very happy.
Now, I guess in's time I got on with my studies. I look forward to hearing about your trip soon.
Best wishes,
Tan

Many thanks for your recent letter. I'm sorry I haven't invited you to my mother's birthday party on last Monday.

Last Monday tells us the party was in the past, so use Simple Past (I didn't invite you) instead of Present Perfect (I haven't invited you).

Clive

Thank you very much for your help.

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