Young people really gets (The verb does not agree with the subject.) benefits when traveling. First of all, traveling help (The verb does not agree with the subject.) the (wrong word) to develop and improve thier personalities (I do not know what "improve their personality" means.) and bulilds confidence and ability to adoptin (That is not a valid word.) in foreign setuations. Secondly, Second, they have the chance to practise with native speakers to develop the language skills they have learned . Thirdly, Third, they can dicover the cultures and learn more informations information is non-count. Do not add -s.) about countries they visit . İn short , travel is a great opportunity for young people to improve their personalities and learning (wrong verb form) more about the world.
Young people really gets benefits when traveling. First of all, traveling help the to develop and improve thier personalities and bulilds confidence and ability to adoptin in foreign setuations. Secondly, they have the chance to practise with native speakers to develop the language they have learned . Thirdly, they can dicover the cultures and learn more informations about countries they visit . İn short , travel is a great opportunity for young people to improve their personalities and learning more about the world.