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Is the given sentence correct?
Your text has very negative exposition of Asians.
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Your text presents a very negative impression of Asians.
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Thank you for the correction.

How would you modify the original sentence so that exposition can be used?
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I wouldn't. I replaced the word because I felt it was inappropriate.
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