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Hello everybody,

i hope i am here right. I will to improve my school englisch.
First of all I start to write a report of an accident. And I have read the ussualy tense for describing an accident is the past-tense.
I hope you can give me an accessment about the report.

On Thursday at 10:25 a worker in the chemical plant found (find) by a female colleague. He lay (lie) on the floor. His colleague checked (check) that that he was still breathed (breath) and then called (call) the Police services. The injured man took (take) to a doctor where he later recovered (recover). An investigation at the company found (find) that the bottle containing a dangerous liquid escaped (escape) into the air. While he had been working in the room he became (become) drowsy and the fell (fall) unconciuos. Investigating officers are interviewing everyone who worked (work) in the factory that morning.

Are the these ok?
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AnonymousOn Thursday at 10:25 a worker in the chemical plant was found (find) by a female colleague, laying lying (lie) on the floor.
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On Thursday at 10:25 a worker in the chemical plant found (find) by a female colleague, laying (lie) on the floor. His colleague checked (check) that that he was still breathing (breath) and then called (call) the Police services. The injured man was taken (take) to a doctor where he later recovered (recover). An investigation at the company found (find) that the bottle containing a dangerous liquid which had escaped (escape) into the air. While he had been working in the room he became (become) drowsy and fell (fall) unconscious. Investigating officers are interviewing everyone who worked (work) in the factory that morning.
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His colleague checked (check) that that he was still breathing* (breath) and then called (call) the Police services. The injured man *was taken(take) to a doctor where he later recovered (recover). An investigation at the company found (find) that the bottle containing a dangerous liquid escaped (escape) into the air. While he had been working in the room he became (become) drowsy and the fell (fall) unconscious. Investigating officers are interviewing everyone who worked (work) in the factory that morning.